Brackish

[Rhea's Work]

You write, like a writer friend of mine writes, as though your words are pulled straight from your own marrow -- so that the reader feels every last word.

[Pretty Thunder]

Thank you for reading. I appreciate you. 🖤🌌

[Blackthorn]

yes every word

[Subliminal Daggers]

Unbelievably fluid and harmonic imagery. You craft some of the best.

[Pretty Thunder]

Thank you for reading. I appreciate you. 🖤🌌

[Blackthorn]

yes all true

[Deborah Kent]

"Loss is another

word for undertow."

Yes I have someone who sings to me

"Inside and outside of the body"

His wet ringlets Brackish now

Bless you for making it known

seen heard felt from below

Hitting below the belt

[voidlight alchemy]

I’m so in love with the imagery. Beautiful work 🖤

[Pretty Thunder]

Thank you for reading.

[Mathew Moreland]

Great poem. The rhythm is trance like the words pulling you along. The formatting of it helps too. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

[Pretty Thunder]

Thank you for reading so deeply 🖤🌌

[Kim Williams, M.Div.]

I grew up in coastal South Carolina. You are writing my sensory stories in this one.

[Pretty Thunder]

Sweet. Thank you for always reading so deeply. I appreciate you 🌌🌠☕️

[Wildwood Writer]

Beautiful as always ♥️

[Pretty Thunder]

Thank you 🖤🌌

[Wildwood Writer]

You’re welcome ☺️

[Cipher⁉️✨✨]

I really enjoyed this! I did know what the title meant but I felt like my definition was expanded by this poem!