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Ghostkeeper's avatar

There’s something devastating in how ordinary everything feels β€” checkout lines, snow, baskets β€” and yet the violence hums underneath it all. The restraint makes it cut deeper.

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you for reading so deeply πŸŒŒπŸ–€

JCassandra's avatar

So beautiful!

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you for reading πŸŒŒπŸ–€

Paul John Dear's avatar

Toumani DiabatΓ© was one of the great Kora players. The sand will not forget her son. He was of that land. Indigenous. As always, you write truth from a fierce and beautiful heart. Abaraca πŸ™

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Yes Toumani Diabaté has always been on of my favorites. Thank you for reading 🌌🩷

Paul John Dear's avatar

Always a pleasure. If you don’t know him, Seckou Keita is a fine Kora player from the Casamance region of Senegal.

pen n. bolsillo's avatar

indigenous is the only way forward. you’re a force.

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you for reading 🩷🌌

Andrew Rosetta's avatar

one indigenous song

snagged in barbed wire–

rust blooming orange.

Thanks for writing Pretty

Wildwood Writer's avatar

Absolutely beautiful 😍

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you! πŸͺΆπŸŒŒπŸ–€

Wildwood Writer's avatar

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Josh Datko's avatar

I think you always do such a great job of adding color, in the literal and figurative sense, to your poetry.

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you for reading so deeply. I really appreciate you. πŸ–€πŸŒŒπŸͺΆ

Kim Williams, M.Div.'s avatar

Perhaps we have reached point in our collective awareness were "indigenous" natively carries the weight of blood and sorrow and the echo of the insolence of invaders. But this, this piece not only brings that truth - it peels back a deeper reality: indigenous is blessing. transparent. raw. alive.

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you for reading πŸͺΆπŸ–€πŸŒŒ

Richbee's avatar

The way indigenous repeats slams the silence spoken into a face of matches that strike anywhere. Burns the books banned but memorized people live on.

Pretty Thunder's avatar

Thank you for reading πŸ–€πŸͺΆπŸŒŒ

Luna's avatar

Yessssss. β€œβ€¦what won’t be forgotten.” Thank you. πŸ™πŸ½